On the way home from Nationals, Andrew and I had some really interesting conversations about poetry. I even got to look on as Andrew wrote a sonnet on the ride home. This really inspired me to give metered poetry a try. With help from Andrew, this is my first attempt.
I see through eyes of tainted kind,
The truth, the world, my trite, my whole.
Assured of things I've not divined,
My heart is that which lies console.
Within my pride, I try to think,
That I am right within my wrongs.
My hollow faith begins to sink,
Too far away from hallowed throngs.
I stand alone without a choice.
My lies, my vice hath brought me here.
I hope and wait to hear a voice
Of One I know, Who stills my fear.
And now my soul, it doth so pine,
To now behold that glorious sign.
3 comments:
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Luke
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June 24, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Wow. I'll have to try it myself somtime.
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A&A
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June 24, 2009 at 2:57 PM
I, like this. A lot. My friends are so talented! :D
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Andrew
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June 25, 2009 at 6:49 AM
I can't agree more with that sentiment. :) Good job!
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